Day 30 Ultimate Blogging Challenge
Written for: The Write Tribe
Some days ago I wrote a poem on Sita's view of Lord Rama. So I guess it's only fair that I do a post on Lord Rama's view of Sita. And this prompt was just perfect for that.
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Written for: The Write Tribe
She looked most beautiful
Like a golden sunset
Like a fragrant meadow
Like a graceful gazelle
Like a blooming rose
Like a gentle breeze
Like a swan gliding idly
Like a tranquil blue sea
Like a heartfelt melody
Like softly falling snow
Like an enchanting story
Like a glorious rainbow
She looked most beautiful
My mind was in turmoil
Radiant and irresistible
My soul was in joy
With her enchanting smile
My heart she did melt
And as I beheld her eyes
True bliss I felt
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Beautifully described Suzy! Nice take on the prompt! :) Love your blog
ReplyDeleteThanks Mindbrewblog. Glad you liked what I wrote and my blog. Welcome.
DeleteWhat a beautiful poem Suzy! -Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sophie. Glad you liked it and thanks for stopping by.
Deletewow this is so lovely well written.
ReplyDeleteThanks Nayna and welcome to my blog.
DeleteA lovely poem descibing a beautiful woman.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sulekkha. Yes, Sita must've been indescribably beautiful.
DeleteI loved your poem and the way you used the prompt. Wonderful energy to start the day!
ReplyDeleteThanks Paula. Glad you liked it. Welcome to my blog and thanks for visiting.
DeleteOMG ! :) That was so beautiful....exactly what Sita is portrayed like, in Ramayana :) A very very different and beautiful take on the prompt.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sreeja. Happy you stopped by and thanks for your very nice comment.
DeleteThat was so beautiful! :)
ReplyDeleteA wonderful take on the prompt Suzy!
Thanks Pixie. Glad you liked it.
DeleteSuzy , what a divine poem!.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kalpana. glad you liked it.
DeleteThat was beautifully expressed, Suzy.
ReplyDeleteLoved the lines in the end... loved that you are so fair :))
Thanks Shilpa. How could I deprive my beloved Lord Rama of the pleasure of describing Sita.
DeleteThis is so lovely Suzy...!
ReplyDeleteThanks Naba.
Deletesuch a beautiful poem .. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Simple Girl. glad you liked it.
DeleteWow Suzy .. I had a series of goosebumps reading this ... really I love how you made it divine...
ReplyDeleteThanks Shiva. Glad you liked it.
DeleteSuzy this something extraordinary !! It is written so beautifully that I read it at least ten times.
ReplyDeleteAww Usha thank you that's so sweet.
DeleteVibrant poem. True devotion.
ReplyDeleteThanks Vishal. glad you like it.
DeleteWonderful poem Suzy. and very very creative take on prompt.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sugandha. Glad you like it.
DeleteThanks Neelam. Glad you liked it and thanks for visiting my blog.
ReplyDeletebeautiful and divine!
ReplyDeleteYou are talented, Suzy :)
Thanks Ruchira. Such a kind comment <3
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