Tuesday, January 22, 2013

UBC Day 22 - Haiku - Dusk

Day 22 of the Ultimate Blogging Challenge

Haiku Heights - Dusk



Light fights to survive
That moment before nightfall
Dusk marks the cross over

Twilight fading fast
Crimson line, an eerie glow
Dusk blends into night

Dusk the end of day
Peaceful drifting into sleep
Wind down and relax


Warm Regards
Photobucket
Posted by at
Labels: , , , ,

22 comments:

  1. UnknownJanuary 23, 2013 at 1:03 AM

    MMMMM....ZZZZZZ!

    ReplyDelete
  2. Carol TomanyJanuary 23, 2013 at 1:10 AM

    Lovely Haiku - one of my favourite formats!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. SuzyJanuary 23, 2013 at 10:00 PM

      Thanks Carol - I love haiku. You can say so much in so little! Thanks for dropping by.

      Delete
  3. Jessica MJanuary 23, 2013 at 3:10 AM

    I love it! I like how you but three together. I find haikus challenging, yet fun to write...maybe because of the challenge..the having to pay attention to form.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. SuzyJanuary 23, 2013 at 10:01 PM

      Thanks Jessica. They are fun to write - I have to keep counting and checking many times before publishing.

      Delete
  4. AnonymousJanuary 23, 2013 at 3:33 AM

    that is a pretty one..

    ReplyDelete
  5. Sanjana January 23, 2013 at 5:51 PM

    ya..its pretty! good work :)

    njn-sorceress.blogspot.com

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. SuzyJanuary 23, 2013 at 10:09 PM

      Thanks Sanjana Glad you liked it and thanks for dropping by.

      Delete
  6. Eliz FrankJanuary 23, 2013 at 9:19 PM

    Very soothing and I love the photo too!
    Followed you on GFC and Networked blogs. :-)
    Eliz

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. SuzyJanuary 23, 2013 at 10:12 PM

      Thanks eof777. glad you liked my post and thanks so much for the follow.

      Delete
  7. AnonymousJanuary 23, 2013 at 11:02 PM

    Suzy Que,

    I loved the poem, but as a certified Night Owl I go just the other way. WHen the hustle and bustle of the day wind down I'm ready to GO. I've been heard to say (often) "Night Owls Unite!"

    Thanks,
    Dr. Hale
    <a href="http://HalePringle.com>HalePringle.com</a>

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. SuzyJanuary 24, 2013 at 11:00 PM

      Thanks Hale. Glad you liked it. I used to be a night owl, but now I find I need to sleep early and longer!

      Delete
  8. Corinne RodriguesJanuary 24, 2013 at 4:58 AM

    Never done a Haiku - but love reading them, Suzy. This one is fantastic.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. SuzyJanuary 25, 2013 at 11:42 PM

      Thanks Corinne. I love writing haiku - you can say so much in so little. Don't know why your comment went into Spam!

      Delete
  9. AnonymousJanuary 24, 2013 at 6:30 AM

    Very relaxing x lovely haiku

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. SuzyJanuary 24, 2013 at 11:01 PM

      Thanks Heavenhappens and thanks for visiting.

      Delete
  10. Martha Jane OrlandoJanuary 24, 2013 at 11:27 AM

    Perfect descriptions, Suzy! Loved the haikus and the photo - set the mood perfectly!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. SuzyJanuary 24, 2013 at 11:02 PM

      Thanks Martha - I tried to make it a serene setting.

      Delete
  11. Magical Mystical TeacherJanuary 25, 2013 at 12:05 PM

    Wish that I could unwind and relax at day's end as you suggest!

    Dusk in the Graveyard

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. SuzyJanuary 25, 2013 at 11:37 PM

      Hi Magical Mystical Teacher. Often wishes come true!

      Delete

Please leave a comment so I know you visited.

However, any inappropriate comments will be removed.

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)
Related Posts Plugin for WordPress, Blogger...

Copyright Protection

DMCA.com