Saturday, October 12, 2013

A Very Berry Haiku




baby berries peep
refreshed from nurtured slumber;
warm leafy cradle.



Written for the Write Tribe Contest: picture haiku - interpret the picture through a haiku.

Update 26/10/2013 - 
So chuffed that Kathy The Giggling Trucker's Wife and I won the contest - see Results at the Write Tribe
Check out Kathy's post The fate of the berries


Warm Regards
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44 comments:

  1. Ah! So cute! And such a different perspective! Lovely haiku, Suzy :)

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  2. simple and meaningful Haiku, Suzy. A visit from UBC buddy. Nice to see you

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    1. Thanks Adelien for your nice comment and for visiting.

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  3. How do you guys weave so beautifully...I tried once and that was it...just not good at haiku.

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    1. Hi Kajal, I struggled with my first haiku but I kept at it. In any case I don't even know if I write proper haiku. Join in Kajal - you can't go wrong with haiku.

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  4. beautiful...you all make it look so easy

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    1. Thanks Shiva. Haiku is addictive. Once you start you enjoy it more and more.

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  5. Awww that's such a cute Haiku....and unlike any other I've read on this prompt!!

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  6. That's a cute one.... All the Best :)

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  7. What could have been better than this... truly soothing Haiku

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    1. Thanks Shellymona. Glad you found it serene.

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    1. Hi Norrbu. It's the first thing I thought of when I saw the picture.

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  9. My prize goes to you .... Loved the leafy cradle and peeping baby berries

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  10. How sweet. I love the imagery you have evoked! Great haiku!!

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  11. That was a sweet Haiku! Loved it :)

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  12. "Comforting." "Soothing." <-- good words used by others, so I'm just going to steal. :)

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  13. Haa the haiku is soo good at imgaery tht I literally want to catch a soothing nap now :)

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  14. Thanks for the entry Suzy... Results in a week :)

    PhenoMenon
    http://throodalookingglass.com/

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  15. Congratulations Suzy, yours is one of the winning entries in the Haiku competition. Check out now...http://writetribe.com/haiku-contest-results/

    PhenoMenon

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  16. Congratulations Suzy..you rock!! Well deserved. ♥

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    1. Thanks Kathy and Congratulations to you too. You rock too Kathy. <3

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    1. Thanks Salim. and thanks for visiting my blog.

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