A Nonet poem written for:
The Write Tribe prompt and for the letter O at ABC Wednesday
Linking to: Poetry Pantry #173
A nonet is a nine line poem. . A nonet can be written on any subject and rhyming is optional. The poem starts with a line that has 9 syllables in it. The second line contains 8 syllables, the third line has 7 syllables and it continues to count down to one syllable in the final line (ninth line)
The prompt:
The subject? Your choice. The only catch is – it must be close to your heart. If possible do let us know why you hold the subject close to your heart. (This may or may not be a part of your poem. If the reason is not a part of the poem, mention it somewhere in the post.)
So here it is, my first nonet poem on a subject close to my heart.
Melody of my eternal soul
Obsession of my lonely heart
You, my original sin
Mesmerising deep eyes
Captivating smile
Etched in my soul
Merged spirits
Fused hearts
Bliss
In life one comes across someone that leaves an impression on your heart that simply cannot be erased. Perhaps that person came into your life for just a fleeting moment in time but somehow you just cannot shake that spirit out of your sphere. He or She becomes a kind of obsession but one whose very thoughts brings you intense joy, peace, bliss.
This person, I believe is not just a soul connection, but a great soul connection. I am blessed to have had that moment in time to connect with such a being..
This poem is dedicated to that beautiful soul, who "got underneath my skin" and left an unforgettable imprint in my life and in my heart, that will forever be locked in the depths of my soul. Be at peace D.
And sometimes songs take you back to that moment in time that is etched in memory. So here it is, the song that takes me back in time. One of my favourite songs ... Elton John's Original Sin.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=occgl5Y_d8k
Have a day of wonderful moments and memories
Warm Regards
Tweet
The Write Tribe prompt and for the letter O at ABC Wednesday
Linking to: Poetry Pantry #173
A nonet is a nine line poem. . A nonet can be written on any subject and rhyming is optional. The poem starts with a line that has 9 syllables in it. The second line contains 8 syllables, the third line has 7 syllables and it continues to count down to one syllable in the final line (ninth line)
The prompt:
The subject? Your choice. The only catch is – it must be close to your heart. If possible do let us know why you hold the subject close to your heart. (This may or may not be a part of your poem. If the reason is not a part of the poem, mention it somewhere in the post.)
So here it is, my first nonet poem on a subject close to my heart.
Melody of my eternal soul
Obsession of my lonely heart
You, my original sin
Mesmerising deep eyes
Captivating smile
Etched in my soul
Merged spirits
Fused hearts
Bliss
In life one comes across someone that leaves an impression on your heart that simply cannot be erased. Perhaps that person came into your life for just a fleeting moment in time but somehow you just cannot shake that spirit out of your sphere. He or She becomes a kind of obsession but one whose very thoughts brings you intense joy, peace, bliss.
This person, I believe is not just a soul connection, but a great soul connection. I am blessed to have had that moment in time to connect with such a being..
This poem is dedicated to that beautiful soul, who "got underneath my skin" and left an unforgettable imprint in my life and in my heart, that will forever be locked in the depths of my soul. Be at peace D.
And sometimes songs take you back to that moment in time that is etched in memory. So here it is, the song that takes me back in time. One of my favourite songs ... Elton John's Original Sin.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=occgl5Y_d8k
Have a day of wonderful moments and memories
Warm Regards
Tweet
Wow Suzy this is so beutiful...pure Bliss! Loved it!
ReplyDeleteThanks Aditi. Glad you liked it and felt the bliss.
DeleteGreat idea for O. You did a good job with obsession. Carver, ABC Wed. Team
ReplyDeleteThanks Carver - it's always fun to mix up some prompts.
DeleteLovely poem. And beautifully written
ReplyDeleteThanks Nischala. Glad you thought so.
DeleteI had never heard of a nonnet before, and will have to try my hand at one. Absolutely beautiful, Suzy!
ReplyDeleteThanks Martha. I had never heard of it before either but it was an interesting challenge. Will look forward to reading yours.
DeleteThat is a brilliant piece! and you say its your first nonet.Well done
ReplyDeleteThanks KP it sure is. glad you thought it was that good.
DeleteSuzy you have done it marvelously.
ReplyDeleteThanks Usha. :)
DeleteWell-crafted message!
ReplyDeleteROG, ABC Wednesday team
Thanks Roger.
Delete:-) It is lovely, Suzy. My heart is full of indelible marks, too. Marks that i cherish.
ReplyDeleteThanks Vidya - so many moments of our life enclosed within our soul. So many moments to live over again. I love that we can.
DeleteVery well written Suzy...I attempted it too...lets see what everyone has to say about that.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sugandha - off to read yours.
DeleteWow!! That's beautifully written Suzy!
ReplyDeleteAnd I do like the Elton John song. :)
Thanks Mytakeoneverything. glad you liked it.
DeleteVery nice !
ReplyDeletePhenoMenon
Thanks Pheno
DeleteHello Suzy, have a nice day!
ReplyDeleteThanks you too Retriever
Deletewriting nine lines is disuading me!
ReplyDeleteBut you will still write them won't you Mina?
Deletewhen you find just such a connection it is a beautiful thing...is it a sin? i think most anything can be one when we put it above all else, but even that speaks to its depth
ReplyDeleteA connection like this is beautiful Brian. Thanks for visiting my poem here - I usually post on my other blog.
Deletesimply beautiful Suzy.........
ReplyDeleteThanks Sumana. Glad you liked it.
DeleteEnjoyed this beautiful obsession/original sin poem.
ReplyDeleteGlad you did Mademoiselle Modelle and thanks for visiting my blog.
DeleteBeautiful way to sin. I think everyone wants this!
ReplyDeleteOh lol Thanks Stormcat Poetry.
DeleteThis one resonates Suzy. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sunita, glad you liked it. When my posts resonate with someone, it brings me joy and makes my writing worthwhile. Thank you.
DeleteThat's beautiful, Suzy:)
ReplyDeletehttp://vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com/2013/11/06/nonet-music-and-comforting-notes
Thanks Vishal. Glad you liked it.
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