baby berries peep
refreshed from nurtured slumber;
warm leafy cradle.
Update 26/10/2013 -
So chuffed that Kathy The Giggling Trucker's Wife and I won the contest - see Results at the Write Tribe
Check out Kathy's post The fate of the berries
Warm Regards
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What a comforting haiku is this.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kalpana.
DeleteAh! So cute! And such a different perspective! Lovely haiku, Suzy :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Shilpa. Glad you liked it.
Deletesimple and meaningful Haiku, Suzy. A visit from UBC buddy. Nice to see you
ReplyDeleteThanks Adelien for your nice comment and for visiting.
DeleteHow do you guys weave so beautifully...I tried once and that was it...just not good at haiku.
ReplyDeleteHi Kajal, I struggled with my first haiku but I kept at it. In any case I don't even know if I write proper haiku. Join in Kajal - you can't go wrong with haiku.
Deletebeautiful...you all make it look so easy
ReplyDeleteThanks Shiva. Haiku is addictive. Once you start you enjoy it more and more.
DeleteAwww that's such a cute Haiku....and unlike any other I've read on this prompt!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Aditi. Glad you liked it.
DeleteThat's a cute one.... All the Best :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Me.
DeleteWhat could have been better than this... truly soothing Haiku
ReplyDeleteThanks Shellymona. Glad you found it serene.
DeleteI love this. Very soothing and lyrical.
ReplyDeleteThanks Talya. Glad you liked it.
DeleteThat is a beautiful take.Excellent.
ReplyDeleteTHanks KParthasarathi.
Deletecradle is quite right, no?
ReplyDeleteHi Norrbu. It's the first thing I thought of when I saw the picture.
DeleteMy prize goes to you .... Loved the leafy cradle and peeping baby berries
ReplyDeleteAww thanks Shiva. That's so sweet.
DeleteHow sweet. I love the imagery you have evoked! Great haiku!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Kathy. Glad you liked it.
DeleteThat was a sweet Haiku! Loved it :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Themuseumpiece.
DeleteLovely, Very soothing Haiku :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sunita.
Delete"Comforting." "Soothing." <-- good words used by others, so I'm just going to steal. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Gary.
DeleteHaa the haiku is soo good at imgaery tht I literally want to catch a soothing nap now :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Mina. Hope you had a good snooze.
DeleteThanks for the entry Suzy... Results in a week :)
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Thanks Pheno.
DeleteSuch a sweet haiku!:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Tarang.
DeleteCongratulations Suzy, yours is one of the winning entries in the Haiku competition. Check out now...http://writetribe.com/haiku-contest-results/
ReplyDeletePhenoMenon
Thanks Pheno. So chuffed.
DeleteCongratulations Suzy..you rock!! Well deserved. ♥
ReplyDeleteThanks Kathy and Congratulations to you too. You rock too Kathy. <3
Deletevery good
ReplyDeleteThanks Salim. and thanks for visiting my blog.
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