Monday, August 13, 2012

Haiku - Soul, Sojourn

Haiku Heights - Soul
Sensational Haiku Wednesday - Sojourn



My eternal soul
Chronicler of my sojourns
Steering by starlight







This life a sojourn
A delightful adventure
My soul's deep desire 






Warm Regards
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34 comments:

  1. C.S.HAugust 14, 2012 at 1:37 AM

    I am becoming a huge fan of Haikus! This was very beautiful!

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    1. SuzyAugust 14, 2012 at 8:30 PM

      Thanks Crystal. It's amazing how 3 little lines of 17 syllables can say so much. Less is definitely more with Haiku. Thanks for dropping by.

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  2. The PoetAugust 14, 2012 at 2:50 PM

    My dear Suzy,
    This style of writing I always admire for I can never do it. The ending to this one was very beautiful. I was touched. Thanks for sharing my friend.

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    1. SuzyAugust 14, 2012 at 8:33 PM

      Thanks Andy. I tried my hand at Haiku 6 years ago and enjoyed it so much I kept at it.

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  3. The PoetAugust 14, 2012 at 3:38 PM

    Dear Suzy,
    Finally getting around to visiting everyone from Blog Hop Saturday! #4.
    Just wanted to say thanks for linking up and hope to see you for the next one on September 1st. Have a great week ahead!

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    1. SuzyAugust 14, 2012 at 8:34 PM

      Enjoy your week too and will look forward to the next blog hop.

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  4. anthonynorthAugust 15, 2012 at 7:29 PM

    Great mystical feel to these.

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  5. AnonymousAugust 15, 2012 at 8:22 PM

    Great Haiku! :)

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  6. Balqis DBJAugust 15, 2012 at 11:59 PM

    Beautiful Haikus. Loved it! :)

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  7. Magical Mystical TeacherAugust 16, 2012 at 12:38 AM

    Although we are all sojourners here for a time, it's not always delightful, as you suggest. I believe there are some sojourners who are experiencing deep pain and anguish and sorrow.

    A Pilgrim’s Sojourn

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    1. SuzyAugust 17, 2012 at 6:56 PM

      Hi Magical Mystical Teacher. Your thoughts on life are very valid but I write from my perspective of life. My belief is that in the end, all of life balances out.

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  8. carol l mckennaAugust 16, 2012 at 12:47 AM

    wonderfully contemplative haiku ~ well penned ~ (A Creative Harbor)

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  9. Journey of LifeAugust 16, 2012 at 6:36 AM

    Beautifully written! Love it!

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    1. SuzyAugust 17, 2012 at 6:57 PM

      Thanks Journey of Life. glad you liked it.

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  10. joanneAugust 16, 2012 at 8:25 AM

    Your haiku remind me of softness and calm......and a joie-de-vivre!

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    1. SuzyAugust 17, 2012 at 6:58 PM

      Thanks Joanne. that's exactly what I was aiming for.

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  11. Jenn @ Youknow...that Blog?August 16, 2012 at 12:39 PM

    Wonderful, loved them both!

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  12. Kathy ReedAugust 16, 2012 at 12:50 PM

    Very nice haiku!

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    1. SuzyAugust 17, 2012 at 6:58 PM

      Thanks kkkkaty. Thanks for visiting and commenting.

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  13. PattiKenAugust 16, 2012 at 2:00 PM

    These are great. Thank you.

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    1. SuzyAugust 17, 2012 at 6:59 PM

      Thanks PattiKen. glad you liked them and thanks for the visit.

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  14. AnonymousAugust 16, 2012 at 2:15 PM

    I like "Chronicler of my sojourns"

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    1. SuzyAugust 17, 2012 at 7:02 PM

      Thanks Becca. Glad you enjoyed that line.

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  15. UnknownAugust 17, 2012 at 3:13 PM

    Beautiful Haiku. I love the way you used the word.
    Mine is here
    Have you an AWESOME WEEK!
    hugs
    shakira

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  16. Ramesh SoodAugust 18, 2012 at 12:21 AM

    Delightful adventure indeed...It felt nice here.. RS:)

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  17. *Dark Angel*August 18, 2012 at 6:20 AM

    Such a beautiful piece of poetic verses, loved it :)

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    1. SuzyAugust 18, 2012 at 5:39 PM

      Thanks Dark Angel. Glad you liked them. Thanks for visiting.

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