Sunday, May 19, 2013

Write Tribe - Three Friends


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A lonely brown door
Waiting for someone to knock
Waste not a felled tree

A pretty blue line
Outlines the lonely brown door
Pretends to be sky

A little cactus
Enhances beauty of door
Three friends beckoning



Written for the Write Tribe Photo Prompt.

Write Tribe Prompt

Warm Regards
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32 comments:

  1. I like how you made that blue line pretend to be the sky and the way you brought out the loneliness of the brown door on which no one knocks.

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    1. Thanks Cynthia - the blue line just screamed sky at me.

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  2. Wow! that's some imagination. The cactus does enhance the beauty.

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    1. Thanks Janu - haiku makes my imagination run wild.

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  3. Oh, so simple and lovely :)

    am wowed.

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    1. Thanks Ava for your nice comment and for visiting.

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  4. Amazing imagination! Great one, Suzy!

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    1. Thanks Kajal - glad you liked it.

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  5. U soun tht up beautifully! Enjoyed reading it...

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    1. Thanks Meena - glad you enjoyed it.

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  6. Loved your imagination Suzy... too good!!

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  7. That was lovely Suzy...great way of interpreting the picture.

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  8. I liked the way you have read the picture! Very cool, very different! :)

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    1. Thanks Shilpa, it was a tough one to do.

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  9. Wonderful little story.

    http://joycelansky.blogspot.com

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    1. Thanks Joyce. Glad you liked it.

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  10. Love your take on the picture :)

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  11. I absolutely love how you linked this to protecting the Earth. I would never have seen it that way! Quite brilliant.

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    1. Thanks Corinne. I think that thought came from a tree we just trimmed. It was needed but I felt quite sad and hope that the trimmed branches will be of use to someone.

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  12. Short simple and sweet Suzy :)

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  13. wow how beautifully you have explained the whole picture in words with a nice rhythm to it :)

    Richa

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    1. Thanks Richa. Glad you liked it.

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  14. Wonderful! I like how you have used each element of the pic to transform it into something completely different - and yet totally naturally fitting.

    Really liked this one. Thanks. :-)

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    1. Thanks Raja. Glad you liked it.

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  15. Your words are spontaneous, written very well in a simple manner, thanks for sharing !

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    1. Thanks Genevive. Happy you thought so.

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