Wednesday, May 8, 2013

100 Words - Quiet Conversations

100 Words On Saturday


Each morning I waited as I stood in line.
I loved those moments when his eyes met mine.
No words needed just the beat of hearts.

His time on earth was over.
So he left for his home in the sky.
Now I lie alone in the darkness and as I listen to the sounds of silence, I close my eyes.
No words needed just connections through thin veils.

And then I pray to the Heavens with devotion and faith.
And in my dreams He comes to me to comfort and love.
No words needed just the fusion of souls.


For 100 Words at Everyday Gyaan


Warm Regards
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  1. Shilpa GargMay 8, 2013 at 8:04 PM

    Very poignant yet so beautiful.

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    1. SuzyMay 8, 2013 at 8:49 PM

      Thanks Shilpa - every word of it true :)

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  2. AnonymousMay 8, 2013 at 8:39 PM

    Very nice poem... I dont agree with the thought for week though. I can only have faith when I understand

    PhenoMenon
    http://capturedalive.wordpress.com/2013/05/07/quest-for-solace/

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    1. SuzyMay 8, 2013 at 8:50 PM

      Thanks PhenoMenon - that takes practice and a whole lot of cruel knocks in life before the faith comes.

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  3. Bhavya NMay 8, 2013 at 9:57 PM

    Thank you for sharing this Suzy. So poignant, and so relate-able :)

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  4. Corinne RodriguesMay 8, 2013 at 10:04 PM

    I'm glad you had that time with him, before he departed, Suzy. Those are moments to be treasured. Someday we shall all be together with our loved ones, is my belief.

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    1. SuzyMay 9, 2013 at 6:51 PM

      I so believe that too Corinne, that we will be together again with our loved ones. He was so sweet - so sad he died so young.

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  5. Grace Grits and GardeningMay 9, 2013 at 12:18 AM

    Beautiful Suzy. Sad yet beautiful.

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  6. AnonymousMay 9, 2013 at 3:00 AM

    I agree with Corinne. Touching poem.

    http://www.heresmysay.com/100-words-on-saturday-quiet-conversation/

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  7. RachnaMay 9, 2013 at 3:13 AM

    Oh this was so beautiful. It tugged at my heart strings! Hugs to you.

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    1. SuzyMay 9, 2013 at 6:57 PM

      Thanks Rachna for you nice comment and for the hugs. Send you hugs too.

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  8. Kajal KapurMay 9, 2013 at 3:23 AM

    This is really beautiful. ...made me bit sad, though. But its a beautifully done piece full of emotions.

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    1. SuzyMay 9, 2013 at 6:59 PM

      Thanks Kajal. Glad you like it even though it made you a little sad.

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  9. UnknownMay 9, 2013 at 8:32 PM

    Ah Suzy this soul stirring and soaked in emotion.I really liked it,

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    1. SuzyMay 9, 2013 at 9:58 PM

      Thanks Usha. Glad you liked it and thanks for dropping by.

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  10. PixieMay 10, 2013 at 3:59 AM

    so sad and yet so beautifully written..
    Reminded me of my grandpa :)

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  11. Philip Verghese 'Ariel'May 11, 2013 at 10:40 PM

    Hi Suzy,
    Its Great lose
    but hope is still there!
    We will meet up with our
    loved ones who departed us.
    Let us live on that hope
    Keep writing
    Keep inform
    I am Keep inform
    Keep writing
    Philip @ Philipscom
    An ambassador to A to Z Challenge @ Tina's Life is Good
    And My Bio-blog

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    1. SuzyMay 12, 2013 at 5:24 PM

      Thanks Philip. Welcome to my blog and thanks for following.

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