Thursday, January 30, 2014

UBC Day 30 - She Looked Most Beautiful

Day 30 Ultimate Blogging Challenge 
Written for: The Write Tribe 

She looked most beautiful
Like a golden sunset
Like a fragrant meadow
Like a graceful gazelle
Like a blooming rose
Like a gentle breeze
Like a swan gliding idly
Like a tranquil blue sea
Like a heartfelt melody
Like softly falling snow
Like an enchanting story
Like a glorious rainbow

She looked most beautiful
My mind was in turmoil
Radiant and irresistible
My soul was in joy
With her enchanting smile
My heart she did melt
And as I beheld her eyes
True bliss I felt

image source:  google images


Some days ago I wrote a poem on Sita's view of Lord Rama. So I guess it's only fair that I do a post on Lord Rama's view of Sita. And this prompt was just perfect for that.


Have a day filled with peace and love

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Warm Regards
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34 comments:

  1. Beautifully described Suzy! Nice take on the prompt! :) Love your blog

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    1. Thanks Mindbrewblog. Glad you liked what I wrote and my blog. Welcome.

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  2. What a beautiful poem Suzy! -Wonderful!

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    1. Thanks Sophie. Glad you liked it and thanks for stopping by.

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  3. wow this is so lovely well written.

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    1. Thanks Nayna and welcome to my blog.

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  4. A lovely poem descibing a beautiful woman.

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    1. Thanks Sulekkha. Yes, Sita must've been indescribably beautiful.

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  5. I loved your poem and the way you used the prompt. Wonderful energy to start the day!

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    1. Thanks Paula. Glad you liked it. Welcome to my blog and thanks for visiting.

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  6. OMG ! :) That was so beautiful....exactly what Sita is portrayed like, in Ramayana :) A very very different and beautiful take on the prompt.

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    1. Thanks Sreeja. Happy you stopped by and thanks for your very nice comment.

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  7. That was so beautiful! :)
    A wonderful take on the prompt Suzy!

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    1. Thanks Kalpana. glad you liked it.

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  9. That was beautifully expressed, Suzy.
    Loved the lines in the end... loved that you are so fair :))

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    1. Thanks Shilpa. How could I deprive my beloved Lord Rama of the pleasure of describing Sita.

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    1. Thanks Simple Girl. glad you liked it.

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  11. Wow Suzy .. I had a series of goosebumps reading this ... really I love how you made it divine...

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  12. Suzy this something extraordinary !! It is written so beautifully that I read it at least ten times.

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    1. Aww Usha thank you that's so sweet.

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  13. It is beautiful and without a picture I would have wondered who can look that wonderful.

    I am here: http://byastall.blogspot.in/2014/02/she-looked-most-beautiful-wednesday.html

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    1. Thanks Neelam. Glad you liked it and thanks for visiting my blog.

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  14. Wonderful poem Suzy. and very very creative take on prompt.

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    1. Thanks Sugandha. Glad you like it.

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  15. beautiful and divine!

    You are talented, Suzy :)

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    1. Thanks Ruchira. Such a kind comment <3

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