Friday, January 17, 2014

UBC Day 17 - The Little Shoe

Day 17 Ultimate Blogging Challenge


Written for The Write Tribe Wednesday (Photo) Prompt




Little Cindy watched her little shoe fall down to the rocks below. There was no way she could reach it. Slowly she walked home, sad and a little fearful. Her mother would be very cross.

At a short distance away, a young lad watched the shoe fall and the look of horror and sadness on Cindy's face. As she walked away slowly, preparing to meet her fate at home, the young lad climbed down and retrieved her shoe.

As Cindy reached her home, she saw the young lad racing up to her with her little shoe. As he handed her the little shoe he watched her eyes light up in surprise and joy. The radiant smile on her face made it all worthwhile. Then quietly he walked away.

Little did she know that someday that young lad would grow up to be a wonderful, handsome and charming young man, and that history would repeat itself in the form of a glass slipper!


Have a fairy tale day.


Check out these awesome bloggers who are also taking part in the UBC challenge:
  Shilpa  Kajal  Richa  Jairam  Sheethal  Kathy  Swati  Michelle  Nabanita

My previous UBC Jan 2014 posts here


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27 comments:

  1. Beautiful story, Suzy :) Now I know who 'Cindy' grows up to be ..:D

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  2. Now that's a beautiful take on an amazing fairy tale ! Great stuff Suzy!

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  3. Enjoyed the little spin you put on Cindy's tale, Suzy!

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    1. Thanks Amy. I just kept thinking of the glass slipper when I saw that pic.

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  4. Awww. I love fairy tales. This was a great story Suzy:-) "Cindy" is a very special woman!

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    1. Thanks Dr Tandy. Glad you liked it.

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  5. That's a heartwarming fairy tale! Loved it, Suzy :)

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    1. Thanks Shilpa. glad you liked it.

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  6. Oh my God that was awesome! Little Cinderella! :)

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    1. Thanks Naba. Yes Little Cinderella :D

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    1. Thanks Bharati. Glad you liked it.

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  8. Very nice tale weaved in with the prompt :) Loved the ending.

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    1. Thanks Poornima. Glad you liked it.

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  9. Oh Suzy!! I love this story! What a lovely modern day fairy tale you have concocted. Well done! ♥

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    1. Thanks Kathy. seriously it's the only thing I could think of.

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  10. That was very beautiful! Loved the story :)

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    1. Thanks Sheethal.Glad you loved my story.

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  11. Such a wonderful connection Suzy! Amazing imagination :-)

    Richa

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    1. Thanks Richa - or perhaps lack of imagination :)

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  12. Woah! Loved the fairy tale touch to it! :)

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    1. Thanks Aayesha. Glad you liked it.

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  13. wow..wat a fairly tale imagination..loved it ...cindy hun!!!

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  14. Loved the beautiful fairy tale. Good one Suzy !

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  15. Truly fairy tale, truly amazing:)
    http://vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com/2014/01/18/wednesday-prompt-2014-3-the-perfect-winter-gift

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