Monday, August 13, 2012

Haiku - Soul, Sojourn

Haiku Heights - Soul
Sensational Haiku Wednesday - Sojourn



My eternal soul
Chronicler of my sojourns
Steering by starlight







This life a sojourn
A delightful adventure
My soul's deep desire 






Warm Regards
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34 comments:

  1. I am becoming a huge fan of Haikus! This was very beautiful!

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    1. Thanks Crystal. It's amazing how 3 little lines of 17 syllables can say so much. Less is definitely more with Haiku. Thanks for dropping by.

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  2. My dear Suzy,
    This style of writing I always admire for I can never do it. The ending to this one was very beautiful. I was touched. Thanks for sharing my friend.

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    1. Thanks Andy. I tried my hand at Haiku 6 years ago and enjoyed it so much I kept at it.

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  3. Dear Suzy,
    Finally getting around to visiting everyone from Blog Hop Saturday! #4.
    Just wanted to say thanks for linking up and hope to see you for the next one on September 1st. Have a great week ahead!

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    1. Enjoy your week too and will look forward to the next blog hop.

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  4. Although we are all sojourners here for a time, it's not always delightful, as you suggest. I believe there are some sojourners who are experiencing deep pain and anguish and sorrow.

    A Pilgrim’s Sojourn

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    1. Hi Magical Mystical Teacher. Your thoughts on life are very valid but I write from my perspective of life. My belief is that in the end, all of life balances out.

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  5. wonderfully contemplative haiku ~ well penned ~ (A Creative Harbor)

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    1. Thanks Journey of Life. glad you liked it.

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  7. Your haiku remind me of softness and calm......and a joie-de-vivre!

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    1. Thanks Joanne. that's exactly what I was aiming for.

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    1. Thanks kkkkaty. Thanks for visiting and commenting.

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    1. Thanks PattiKen. glad you liked them and thanks for the visit.

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  10. I like "Chronicler of my sojourns"

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    1. Thanks Becca. Glad you enjoyed that line.

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  11. Beautiful Haiku. I love the way you used the word.
    Mine is here
    Have you an AWESOME WEEK!
    hugs
    shakira

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  12. Delightful adventure indeed...It felt nice here.. RS:)

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  13. Such a beautiful piece of poetic verses, loved it :)

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    1. Thanks Dark Angel. Glad you liked them. Thanks for visiting.

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